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‘Can You Stay Still?’ Progression 10.0!

So reading back my script I realised that I’d left out the most important part of the project – sitting still. So I went back and edited my script to make sure I stuck to the brief.

Script

 OPENING TITLES

Narrator – Alan and Sophie in…

SCREEN CHANGE

Narrator – Alan visits the doctor.

CUT TO NEXT SHOT

DOCTORS INT. DAYTIME.

Narrator – Oh, hello Alan and Sophie.

Sophie – Hello!

Narrator – Oh dear, what’s wrong with Alan?

Sophie – she’s not at all well, We’re here to see the doctor but she’s scared.

Narrator – Oh there’s nothing to be afraid of Alan, the doctor will make you feel better, just sit still and it’ll be over in a flash.

Ellie – Alan to the doctor’s office, please.

SCREEN CHANGE

DOCTORS SECRETARY INT. DAYTIME.

Ellie – Hello sweetie you must be Alan, and you must be Sophie.

Narrator – This is Ellie; Ellie is the doctor’s personal assistant.

Sophie – Nice to meet you.

Ellie – Doctor. Owl is expecting you, go right on in.

Sophie – Thank you, c’mon Alan.

Ellie – Have fun, and make sure you stay still for the Doctor.

 

SCREEN CHANGE

DOCTORS WARD INT. DAYTIME.

Dr. Owl – Hello young lady.

Sophie – Hello!

Dr. Owl – And who might this be?

Sophie – This is Alan, she’s not very well.

Dr. Owl – Lets have a look at her shall we?

ALAN SITS ON THE BENCH LOOKING SCARED

Sophie – You have to sit still for the doctor Alan or he can’t help.

Dr. Owl – Yes, please sit still Alan.

Narrator – There’s nothing to be scared of Alan, the doctor knows what he’s doing.

Dr. Owl – That’s right… hmm, there we are all you need is some medicine and you’ll be ok Alan.

Sophie – You see, you were worried about nothing you big scaredy cat!

Narrator – There was nothing to be afraid of at all, thank you doctor.

Sophie – yes thank you doctor! You see everyone, sitting still for the doctor isn’t scary! See you next time!

CREDITS

END

 

 

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