So reading back my script I realised that I’d left out the most important part of the project – sitting still. So I went back and edited my script to make sure I stuck to the brief.
Narrator – Alan and Sophie in…
Narrator – Alan visits the doctor.
CUT TO NEXT SHOT
DOCTORS INT. DAYTIME.
Narrator – Oh, hello Alan and Sophie.
Sophie – Hello!
Narrator – Oh dear, what’s wrong with Alan?
Sophie – she’s not at all well, We’re here to see the doctor but she’s scared.
Narrator – Oh there’s nothing to be afraid of Alan, the doctor will make you feel better, just sit still and it’ll be over in a flash.
Ellie – Alan to the doctor’s office, please.
DOCTORS SECRETARY INT. DAYTIME.
Ellie – Hello sweetie you must be Alan, and you must be Sophie.
Narrator – This is Ellie; Ellie is the doctor’s personal assistant.
Sophie – Nice to meet you.
Ellie – Doctor. Owl is expecting you, go right on in.
Sophie – Thank you, c’mon Alan.
Ellie – Have fun, and make sure you stay still for the Doctor.
DOCTORS WARD INT. DAYTIME.
Dr. Owl – Hello young lady.
Sophie – Hello!
Dr. Owl – And who might this be?
Sophie – This is Alan, she’s not very well.
Dr. Owl – Lets have a look at her shall we?
ALAN SITS ON THE BENCH LOOKING SCARED
Sophie – You have to sit still for the doctor Alan or he can’t help.
Dr. Owl – Yes, please sit still Alan.
Narrator – There’s nothing to be scared of Alan, the doctor knows what he’s doing.
Dr. Owl – That’s right… hmm, there we are all you need is some medicine and you’ll be ok Alan.
Sophie – You see, you were worried about nothing you big scaredy cat!
Narrator – There was nothing to be afraid of at all, thank you doctor.
Sophie – yes thank you doctor! You see everyone, sitting still for the doctor isn’t scary! See you next time!